Nissan Skyline GT-R (r32)

[Jackson Pennell]

Just two for this shoot, the client decided not to even wash their car before the shoot so it was incredibly diffucult to get a clean shot.

1) Tried to go for a simple yet interesting look in the background, wish I could get rid of those stairs tho...
http://www.team-blend.net/jacksonphoto/jvphotor32a.jpg

2) Nice looking sky but I dont like the bright light to the left :(
http://www.team-blend.net/jacksonphoto/jvphotor32b.jpg

As always, nothing is too harsh if you find it nessecary, please give me the truth.
-Jackson

[Jacob Leveton]

is this the same car?! the second picture makes the car look like it's flat black (and i think the colorful background is the wrong backdrop for the car, needs something more industrial or urban), but in the first shot it's much clossier (but again, i think the wrong backdrop. very snapshot-y)

[John Thawley]

Sorry... you lost me at "the client wouldn't wash the car."

For your beneift... I understand your issue with the stairway... but what about the pole sticking up out of the fender? Sorry... not even worth clicking the shutter. Pay attention.

Second shot... over processed, poor white balance... car and tires are brown. The asphalt is brown. Oh, and did I mention the car is dirty?

Sorry to be harsh... but...

JT

[Jackson Pennell]

haha, not harsh at all, I really appreciate it thanks!