2008 Audi S3..

[Tim Hulme]

Would love to get some C&C on these..?

Was limited to where we were in terms of locations, but was still pretty happy with what I managed to get.

1.
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2270/2477213673_913d2bbd75_o.jpg

2.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3271/2477212237_beff87b3e0_o.jpg

3.
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2348/2478025328_921db899aa_o.jpg

4.
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2277/2477212679_fe36232daf_o.jpg

5.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3174/2478024370_2205980cee_o.jpg

[Daniel Buck]

The car looks great in #5, I think the only thing I would have done differently would be to turn the front wheels towards camera right. And possibly rotated both the camera and the car until there is no building starting or stopping right behind the car. Either all building, or no building directly behind the car.

#4, only thing I would have tried to change would be to rotate the wheel so that the audi logo was horizontal :) Looks like the next spoke gap would have made the logo horizontal, and still kept the same size gap for the text on the caliper

#3, not really to fond of the composition, shopping off 1/4 of the car with alot of open space on the other side seems a little odd to me. I don't mind off center compositions at all, but when it chops off part of the car, it looks strange. However, it might work wonderfully with advertising text on the right side!

#2, looks great to me! I might have tried closing down the aperture so everything is in focus, not sure if this would look any better than the way it is now though. I probably would have tried both ways.

#1, the composition doesn't bother me, but I don't like the black and white with the red logo. Just feels a little odd/gimiky to me :)


I love the lighting and color, works great with the black car I think! Even if the sky blows out to white

[Tim Hulme]

Thanks for the detailed crit dan!

[Daniel Buck]

:) Most of it is subjective, but those are what I would do (or tried to do) if I were there shooting with you :)

[Tim Hulme]

Any other thoughts or crits...?

[David Adolphus]

I like shallow DOF, but some of these may be a little over the edge for me. #5 has a bit of an odd feel that way