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Eric McClellan
07-20-2009, 12:17 PM
.... kind of a miss mash of stuff I've been doing lately. Got a lot more I haven't finished yet.
C&C welcome.
1
http://kungphu.com/ar/impermanence/proofs/carcraft2009/_EMM5058.jpg
2
http://kungphu.com/ar/impermanence/proofs/carcraft2009/_EMM5414.jpg
3.
http://kungphu.com/ar/impermanence/gallery/thumbs/lrg-1241-_emm4836.jpg
4.
http://photos.jpgmag.com/1825950_196022_058102823e_p.jpg
5.
http://impermanence.kungphu.com/proofs/josh-spider/_EMM4774.jpg
6.
http://kungphu.com/ar/impermanence/gallery/thumbs/lrg-1239-_emm4694.jpg
Steve Stein
07-20-2009, 02:03 PM
2 - "Cotton candy explosion in aisle 5!"
What the heck happened there? Hopefully it was a burnout.
3 - Whatever is above the driver's side in the stands kind of detracts from the car. My eye hit that right away.
4 - I like this shot. Simple, but well composed.
5 - Nice lighting. I may have not cropped it as tight.
6 - I like this shot. Nice lighting but it looks like the car sits lower camera right due to the crown in the road?
Daniel Buck
07-20-2009, 02:32 PM
Wow, killer detail in the smoke in shot 2, that's pretty sweet looking, almost looks CG :D
Sevan Pulurian
07-20-2009, 06:12 PM
I really dig #2, now if you could only just photoshop that dude out. Was he doing the burn out in those tires that have to two colored stripes down the center of the tire or did you PS that?
Overall clean and simple shots. I like them all.
Sevan
Eric McClellan
07-20-2009, 11:31 PM
How's this for editing the guy out?
http://kungphu.com/ar/impermanence/gallery/thumbs/lrg-1710-_emm5414edit.jpg
Cyril Ma
07-20-2009, 11:49 PM
I actually would crop tigher on #4
2 is just money.
Eric Mastrangelo
07-24-2009, 04:01 AM
The updated #2 is much better. I would even go so far as to crop off the sign and background on the right, just leaving the asphalt, the smoke, and the car peeking out, and that's it. Awesome shot though any way you cut it.
Eric McClellan
08-03-2009, 12:21 PM
Appreciate the feedback, thanks :)
Eric McClellan
08-18-2009, 08:25 AM
Well... so much for that Mustang in the first shot. :(
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2571/3765930507_bbce8e2a13_o.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3598/3766727540_af5bc549cc_o.jpg
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