View Full Version : A jetta that stands out by "blending" in
Jackson Pennell
09-17-2006, 10:53 PM
I grew tired of shooting the same old stuff around town so I decided to shoot an unusual looking jetta to have some fun and see what I could come up with.
Here are a few of the shots I like, please feel free to comment or critique as you wish, I appreciate it all!
1http://www.team-blend.net/jacksonphoto/camovw1.jpg
2http://www.team-blend.net/jacksonphoto/camovw4.jpg
3http://www.team-blend.net/jacksonphoto/camovw8.jpg
4http://www.team-blend.net/jacksonphoto/camovw2.jpg
5http://www.team-blend.net/jacksonphoto/camovw3.jpg
6http://www.team-blend.net/jacksonphoto/camovw7.jpg
Thanks for looking and commenting :D
-Jackson
Jacob Leveton
09-18-2006, 12:40 AM
1 - looks decent, but i want to see more of the back end of the jetta. It gets lost in the perspective. Less front, more side profile. it almost looks like a golf from this view.
2 - because the background is solid concrete, the sense of motion is mostly lost. There is wheel movement, but it could use a longer exposure / more complex background that shows off the blur.
3 - I would like to see the car's other side, since the mirror is on that side. The shot is decent, much better than your first shot, but still i think it's a little bland. Also, the background is very orangey. Might want to tone down the saturation on that.
4 - watch the intersection of the building and the roof. again, i would have shot the other side to show off the exhaust and the mirror.
5 - same as the first comment. A little less front, a little more side view. also, i would pull the car away from the curb more and use a bigger apature to get a narrower depth of field. I like the stairs though, cool setting.
6 - I think this is your strongest. Although the color of the wall makes the rear spoiler blend into the background, i dig the angle and height. Did you use a C/P ? the only thing i'd try and get rid of is the bright reflection on the top of the passenger window. It's the only bright part on the entire car. Might need to composite that into the shot though...
Todd Corzett
09-19-2006, 02:17 AM
Is that camo made-up of a bunch of little women? :eek:
Maybe I need to get away from my computer a little... it has been a long day :rolleyes:
-Todd...
Justin Libano
09-19-2006, 11:21 AM
like this Todd?
http://www.fastdecals.com/graphics/mudflap_girl02_sexy.jpg
I think i see it now.
as for the pics, i think the car is too centered in them. Maybe try moving it around the frame somewhat.
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