Few Yellow and Black

[Justin Libano]

Ok, i think i'm ready to get murdered on this board. Let me have it, only way to improve. (composition, lighting, etc) This was my first time lighting with autmobiles (2 AB800s) and I know I can do better.
1
http://libanophotos.com/BerlinFair/sidemarker700.jpg

2
http://libanophotos.com/BerlinFair/caymanhead.jpg

3
http://libanophotos.com/PX3/rear34_700.jpg

4
http://libanophotos.com/PX3/mas_waiting700.jpg

5
http://libanophotos.com/PX3/caymanrear700.jpg

6
http://libanophotos.com/PX3/rearend700.jpg

7
http://libanophotos.com/PX3/sucks.jpg

[Todd Corzett]

The first two are stunning. I really like the Porsche headlight (minus the reflection of the umbrella? at the top right). #4 is really nice as well, great location for the car, but maybe an off-center composition? Very nicely done!

-Todd...

[Jeff Boerio]

I agree with Todd about the first two. I really like the back-end shot of the Porsche .... except for the ceiling reflections really take away from it for me. But you work with what you got, right? I think the lighting in the last two needs a little help, but I really like the composition of the last shot.

Nice stuff!

- Jeff

[Justin Libano]

thanks for looking guys!

[Erik Anderson]

I still think #2 is the winner, but I like the variety you've shown in the others. Nice work (Again!).

[Mark Delbrueck]

The Porsche headlight detail is perfect! I agree about fixing the umbrella reflection. I would fix the deatil of the umbressla, but I'd keep the lighlight since it runs thru the headlight.

[Bob Chapman]

#1 is THE shot. Really nice. Others mentioned #2. But, being primarily a Porsche shooter, I've already seen that shot 100 times. Sure, it's nice, but there's nothing new or different about it. The other one that has high potential is the final shot. I only wish that it had some rear lighting to create a rim along the top of the car and, thus, separate it from your black background.