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Donnell McAllister
07-19-2006, 02:30 PM
1.http://www.motohouston.com/donnell/host/lonestar%20track%20day%205-27-06/lonestar%20329.jpg

2.http://www.motohouston.com/donnell/host/lonestar%20track%20day%205-27-06/lonestar%20407.jpg

3.http://www.motohouston.com/donnell/host/lonestar%20track%20day%205-27-06/lonestar%20432.jpg

4.http://www.motohouston.com/donnell/host/lonestar%20track%20day%205-27-06/lonestar%20058.jpg

Please forgive the overly aggressive watermarks on the following three, they were shot for a website, and I had a large problem with theft, the last event I did for them.

5.http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL77/5765194/11397505/164948463.jpg

6.http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL77/5765194/11397505/164948438.jpg

7.http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL77/5765194/11397505/164943452.jpg

8.http://www.hi-upload.com/uploaded1/c5r4brakes.jpg

9.http://www.hi-upload.com/uploaded1/gokartracing2.jpg

10.http://www.hi-upload.com/uploaded1/risipan.jpg

11.http://www.hi-upload.com/uploaded1/roadandtrackflame.jpg

and one just for kicks...
http://www.hi-upload.com/uploaded1/volleyball.jpg


I'm just an Amateur trying to go pro, so please give me your honest opinions of my work. any advice you can give will be GREATLY appreciated!
Donnell McAllister
07-20-2006, 01:17 PM
nearly 40 views and not a single reply....are they that bad???
Keith Schoeler
07-20-2006, 02:24 PM
Too many photos of too many subjects.

Post a select few of one thing and you'll get some feedback.
Zerin Dube
07-20-2006, 02:26 PM
And if you want critique, I need to move this into the critique forum... Is this where you wanted it?
John Thawley
07-20-2006, 03:20 PM
I could only see two action shots that are sharp.... Your Houston GP stuff is all very soft...

As everyone has pointed out, you've posted too many images with no direct focus on your inquiry. It leaves us to only make general remarks such as mine.

And your just for kicks images is a not very good snapshot of a great ass.

Stick around, read, experiment and learn.

JT
Donnell McAllister
07-20-2006, 05:30 PM
And if you want critique, I need to move this into the critique forum... Is this where you wanted it?


well that is where i posted it originally. i don't know why it was moved.
Donnell McAllister
07-20-2006, 05:33 PM
I could only see two action shots that are sharp.... Your Houston GP stuff is all very soft...

As everyone has pointed out, you've posted too many images with no direct focus on your inquiry. It leaves us to only make general remarks such as mine.

And your just for kicks images is a not very good snapshot of a great ass.

Stick around, read, experiment and learn.

JT


yeah, the houston GP stuff is soft because i was using a 28-135 f/3.5-5.6 so i was forced to use a shutter speed that killed my sharpness. as for all the other shots...they seem sharp to me. if it makes any difference, they are all unedited, with no USM applied, just straight out of the camera.